Tuesday, November 13, 2007

Dream While You'Re Awake! Comments

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Dream while you're awake
To build the world you want to make
Help plan the steps you need to take
First few to taste the success cake!
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Subbaraman N V
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Gita Ashok 28 June 2010

The words here flow so beautifully as in a melodious song. Dreaming while awake Building castles in the air Are but initial steps in its wake To be fine tuned to the needs with care! The way the first two stanzas have been weaved together here in the above four lines is remarkable. The last stanza is filled to the brim with worldly wisdom. A great composition, indeed!

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Mary Das 27 November 2007

Very well written. Yes, we all can relate to this. Thank you for sharing.

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