Dream While You'Re Awake! Comments

The words here flow so beautifully as in a melodious song. Dreaming while awake Building castles in the air Are but initial steps in its wake To be fine tuned to the needs with care! The way the first two stanzas have been weaved together here in the above four lines is remarkable. The last stanza is filled to the brim with worldly wisdom. A great composition, indeed!

Very well written. Yes, we all can relate to this. Thank you for sharing.