Saturday, July 19, 2008

Dream To Sleep Comments

Rating: 4.5

I am to scared to fall apart.
deeper then I ever thought.
everything can go so wrong.
one step, you dont kvow where you belong.
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Nathalie Petersson
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Keith Hendrickson 07 January 2009

wow by far my fav of yours. great write

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Ron Flowers 12 December 2008

This is a beautiful poem. I give it a 10. It sounds to me like you are learning your English rather well. Regards Ron

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premji premji 12 November 2008

nathalie, grew beyond grammer.. and poetry..*10*

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PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE 11 October 2008

deep thought, beautiful.....10

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Stone Granite 19 July 2008

Sleeping is so much less complicated, is it not? Nicely done.

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