Wednesday, October 5, 2016

Dream Tear Comments

Rating: 5.0

the moon is sinking in the west
where it becomes a tear
that falls upon forsaken stars
beyond the atmosphere
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Barry Middleton
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Nosheen Irfan 06 October 2016

This is so lovely. Beautifully written. Nature n feelings are intermingled perfectly. Yes, we'd rather have the dreams of night than the emptiness of the day. A super 10

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Barry Middleton 06 October 2016

Thank you Nosheen. I am so glad you like it. There can come a time in life when dreams are much better than reality.

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