Sunday, February 7, 2010

Dream Squasher! ! ! Comments

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What do we do with broken dreams that hurt so very deep?
Dreams that are made so especially and ones we want to keep
Can we rebuild them desperate to renew or do we let them fall
let our dreams be forever lost they were never ours at all.
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Elizabeth Barry
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Jazib Kamalvi 11 September 2017

A refined poetic imagination, Elizabeth. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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Dr.subhendu Kar 25 October 2012

Let them bounce from wall to floor and stamp them on the ground And hope your broken dreams work out the second time around! dream yet bounces back to unveil hope seems to delve out by mystery, interesting write and inspiring truth, thanks for sharing

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Pamela Lutwyche 27 February 2010

Dreams can make me happy or sad. I had a dream the night and I felt terrible all day. But I must admit I usually have good dreams, which I’m happy about. Good poem.

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Elizabeth Barry

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