~*~*~*~dream Serenade~*~*~*~ Comments

OMG! what a lovely poem! 10+

That was a beautiful poem Randy....Oh yes by the way...I found it...lol

GREAT POEM.................................. I really liked! ! ! ! ! ! dreams are all that we have

wonderful.....i like the way you write..........keep going.......waaaw

hmm, good and interestin write

I really like the pace of your poem, as well as what you're actually saying!

wow...that's really sweet. nice job

this is beautiful...splendid piece.. the way you choose your subject is really great... your words are mystical...and magical... hope i can write like this too...very magical as if im in fairy tale land...and in your dreamy world really beautiful...lots of emotions being expressed here...the happiness, the longing... very meaningful...i can hear the lark singing.. i can hear the serenade.... the whole poem is so lively...and captivating thanks for sharing.. 10+++ _maia_

this is such a wonderful romantic poem great write -Heather S

What enchanting imagery this poem depicts, the lark and the smile, and everything else. I adore this flowing romantic piece with so much love, Randy. Karin Anderson

wow.......this is truly very romantic and beautiful........ one of ur best randy! ! congrats....................

amazing imaery in this beautiful write...very well done...10