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Upon the gentle waves of invisible air
I send my touch to my love
His lips and skin so fair
Our feelings as pure as a snow white dove
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Beautiful poem this Patricia heaps of feeling and tender emotions congratulations
You got the feel and the mood just right for this one, Well written.
That last line is a stunner. Those of us who are lucky enough to know what you mean... know what you mean. t x
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Th' Eye's of th' Mind never lie, Princess...Excellent work, here....how did i miss this pen-gem for so long? ! And, what in th' 'ell happened to this site & that 'ole gang of ours....? Change, they say is always for th' best....This must be th' exception to the proverbial rule, nes pas? ~ F j R ~ __2008__