Wednesday, March 15, 2006

Dream Rush Comments

Rating: 4.9

Speeding with incredible force
Through a mirrored tube
Toward a saphire crystal source,
It takes my breath away;
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Linda Ori
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Not a member No 4 27 January 2007

Lots of poetic and precise detail in this which portrays vividly the dream scenario. Isn't the subconscious magnificently creative, and convincing, as a result of its use of all of our emotional equipment? One great poem follows another here Linda! ! xx

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Robert Howard 15 January 2007

Dreams transcend reality and need poetry to explain how. You got it done.

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Nalini Hebbar 15 July 2006

meet you there someday...since we wrote poems about it surely we are on the hit list! ! ! ...till then lets be happy our minds meet...love...nalini

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ANOTHER FAV THEME OF MINE, SO WELL DELIVERED W/ TYPICAL ORIESQUE ARTISAN QUALITY...7, , , DO I HEAR 8? ...8! ...DO I HERE 9? ...NNNO! .... NOOO? ! ....NNNNNNOOOO! ! ! . THATS BECAUSE I ALREADY HEARD 10, AFTER THE 8 CALL! GREAT WRITE.. ''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''~F. J. R.~''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''

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Dan Tharp 22 March 2006

sounds like a roller coaster ride I was once on. dan

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Charles M Moore 15 March 2006

Incredible story Linda, written with such fervour, Charlie.

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Purple Rose 15 March 2006

What a horrible dream, Linda! Take a hug to relax after that! Very well written! Regards Purple Rose

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