Speeding with incredible force
Through a mirrored tube
Toward a saphire crystal source,
It takes my breath away;
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Dreams transcend reality and need poetry to explain how. You got it done.
meet you there someday...since we wrote poems about it surely we are on the hit list! ! ! ...till then lets be happy our minds meet...love...nalini
ANOTHER FAV THEME OF MINE, SO WELL DELIVERED W/ TYPICAL ORIESQUE ARTISAN QUALITY...7, , , DO I HEAR 8? ...8! ...DO I HERE 9? ...NNNO! .... NOOO? ! ....NNNNNNOOOO! ! ! . THATS BECAUSE I ALREADY HEARD 10, AFTER THE 8 CALL! GREAT WRITE.. ''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''~F. J. R.~''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''
What a horrible dream, Linda! Take a hug to relax after that! Very well written! Regards Purple Rose
Lots of poetic and precise detail in this which portrays vividly the dream scenario. Isn't the subconscious magnificently creative, and convincing, as a result of its use of all of our emotional equipment? One great poem follows another here Linda! ! xx