Thursday, January 31, 2019

Dream - Quartain Comments

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On the edge of the moon
I wonder what life will hold
If I slip from there in this world
What dreams will accompany me to land
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M. Asim Nehal
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Mihaela Pirjol 23 November 2019

'When this happened I started to fall Carelessly to the lyrics Till I reached the clouds'- I love this stanza and the contradiction. I look forward to read more of your poems!

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Dr Antony Theodore 31 January 2019

Dreams and the moon, two wonderful subjects which lives in the mind of a poet. lovely. tony

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M. Asim Nehal

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