Dream Of Hope Comments

a beautiful poem. every word is seeping emotions of sadness, love, and longing. great flow to it and superior wording to make your reader fall into your words and yearn with you for an unrequited love. all i can say is an excellent poem my friend. keep writing and keep looking to the stars and heavens, they will guide your way to the one. all of the elements of a great peom, passion, your heart and a desire for that one true thing that can turn your world into the perfect life. love.10 +++ Jen

This poem is simply beautiful.

real passion, unadulteratedly versed. shan