Saturday, September 26, 2009

Dream Of Hope Comments

Rating: 5.0

It’s a warm and beautiful night,
As I wander outside
So gentle a breeze brushing my skin
The strong scent of flowers, fills in the air
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Tharindu Atukorala
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Jen Capaldi 10 October 2009

a beautiful poem. every word is seeping emotions of sadness, love, and longing. great flow to it and superior wording to make your reader fall into your words and yearn with you for an unrequited love. all i can say is an excellent poem my friend. keep writing and keep looking to the stars and heavens, they will guide your way to the one. all of the elements of a great peom, passion, your heart and a desire for that one true thing that can turn your world into the perfect life. love.10 +++ Jen

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Hebert Logerie Sr. 28 September 2009

This poem is simply beautiful.

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 27 September 2009

real passion, unadulteratedly versed. shan

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Tharindu Atukorala

Tharindu Atukorala

Colombo, Sri Lanka
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