Dream Of Desire....Unrequited Love Comments

wao great combination of rhythm & rhyme...i hv'nt any word to show my expression for this musician's type of poem...really enjoying..one of my feet starting movement up & down, down & up hmmmm

wao great combination of rhythm & rhyme...i hv'nt any word to show my expression for this musician's type of poem...really enjoying..one of my feet starting movement up & down, down & up hmmmm

Hello, Beautifully suggestive and like those dreams, this poem lingers on in your mind for a long time afterwards........

wowwwwwww...and iam saying why your poems are full of music..slow handssssss...this poem cheers me while enjoying reading it..that beauty of surrendering to the lure of a loving love....

A dream of desire written so well, good flow to this 10 Lynda xx

Dream of desire you have woven fabulously...nice rhymes both internal and end rhymes...10+++

My dream sawn....really excellent sir! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

I love how you took this poem from beginning to end with such a great flow and rhyme. It tells a touching story of romance and love. Thank you for sharing.

Great rhyme and beautiful imagery. I really admired the way after 'moon long gone has dimmed' it cleverly spans down to the left with gorgeous metaphors of passion and love. 10 Karin Anderson

'Barefoot to you. Took off my shoe. You my prayer. Stood you there. Temple of my desire.' wonderful write.

The YOU & I at the end brings it all tpgether.