Dream Of Delicious Ice Cream Comments

Can Ghost enjoy Ice Creams?

*** 'way-cool' means here 'excellent'. ***** five (5) stars Very nicely done. Now, GIVE ME ICE CREAM! ! ! ! : ) bri

I would make 'commonsense' into 'common sense'. But you are smart to be on the 'bargain trail'! ! In some places your use of commas at line endings, and fo capital letters vs. lower case letters 'bothers' me. But I'm an ICE CREAM lover and your poem is 'way-cool' *** with me.

'I'm ready to walk on a rope.' Would that be a 'tightrope' over Niagara Falls or to the top of The Eiffel Tower? ?

'sixty a buck, ' what is THAT? ? More favorite lines: 'now don't dare to ask for a heavenly swirl, they'd require my house, my car, my pearl.' Stanza 4 is my favorite so far! ! ;) bri

(cont.) It also brought an image of you to my mind, with your tongus hanging far out of your mouth like a hound dog watching its food bowl being filled to its brim. : )

'The tongue filled with water and spilled all over me.' Assuming 'The tongue' was YOURS and not the vendor's, that line was particularly humorous. (cont.)

Few things are better to dream about than ice cream!