Saturday, December 27, 2014

Dream Number 4 (Love) Comments

Rating: 5.0

Lying together upon a grassy knoll
we watch the wind blow our stars past the moon,
we hold tight, as if not to would bring a death,
though I know it will end, and all too soon.
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Smoky Hoss
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Dave Walker 06 February 2015

Love is the best thing in the world, a great poem.

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Patti Masterman 20 January 2015

A beautiful piece. Captured all the fragility of being in a body and trying to spend a lifetime of love, in however much time one is given..

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Dee Corpolongo 18 January 2015

Very moving and emotional poem. Brought tears to my eyes. True Love. ♥

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Dee Corpolongo 18 January 2015

This was such a moving and emotion-filled poem. It brought tears to my eyes. Bravo.

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Valerie Dohren 07 January 2015

Lovely write Smoky - a plea for love which we all need.

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