Saturday, December 6, 2014

Dream Number 2 (Peace) Comments

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It's a funny joke... ha ha...
but it hurts
without laughter.
Half a head
...
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Smoky Hoss
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Paul Brookes 06 December 2014

Interesting and quite a thought I wonder you may be right. A poem which seems on the surface simple but the more I read the more complex the images. Half baked it was not. Ironic that I wrote a poem called half. weird! ! ! ! Good write.

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Dave Walker 06 December 2014

If we are born, it means we are going to die, it's what we do with the time that we have what counts. A great poem.

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