Saturday, December 6, 2014

Dream Number 1 (Mercy) Comments

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Think what we might
all is never quite right,
though closer and closer we may get
truly, we are nowhere near there yet -
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Noreen Carden 14 December 2014

A very nice prayer poem I am looking forward to reading dream number 2

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Paul Brookes 06 December 2014

Liked this poem you have a ways of saying things which resonate Thanks for sharing 10/10 BB

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Dave Walker 06 December 2014

A great poem, really like this. I had a friend who always said he thought our dreams was real life and our day to day life was the real dream world.

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