In dreams you walked through vast fields of wildflowers,
While river insects sang their autumn Psalms.
Time like a painted lady butterfly,
At last brought new life to your work worn frame.
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The imagery of this poem is very beautiful. A perfect rhythm too. Well penned Enjoyed reading it 10+
‘The music of your mood is safe with me.’ Brilliant touch down. Glib and lithe. Ten++ with euphony. Ms. Nivedita UK Please read my Poems: Why Hack My She [In Elite 500] Enigmatic Navel or others. niv
For it took all your spirit to survive. If this is Heaven, Friend, may I come too? Rachel Ann Butler
Beyond Predictable Beauty of colourful butterflies and rythamic string waves, thank you for sharing,10+++
Your own eloquence dear Sandra was 'never learned in books' as you so tenderly demonstrate in this poem - you are the epitome of aptitude for writing quiet reflective poetry and this is a gem of an example.... it soothes the soul.... thank you my friend love as always - - Fay.
the music of your mood is safe to me...few lines with a great meaning and much sweetness..10++++
surviving and living..the difference told as a music itself the leisure andrelaxation of an ever working nature is amasing..a wonderful poem
A stunning Poem - I am totally enthralled by your use of words – they linger on in the mind and draw me back to read again - again. Dream music - soul music - Sandra's music. A Rare gift you have and faithfully share - Thank you
You have a way of singing us our favorite songs! 'The music of your mood is safe with me.' and all the safer for being shared.
Dream music indeed.you teach us what the ears can see and the eyes can feel, I'll go with this one, never end, ...regards uavanice1
I repeat your words ' May the music never ends '. Best Regards Naseer
This eloquence dream music I hear all through your valuable poems Sandra! And indeed a solace to burning human nature.
Very astonishing poem ingrained with beautiful imageries that show your inside soul so rich with natural scenics..........10/10 Warm Regards Sameer
'The music of your mood is safe with me', a lovely phrase to end a lovely poem. The pictures you paint are so vivid and so very real. Bob
While river insects sang their autumn Psalms. .................................................................. Hello Sandra, Thin poems... Very kind and sincere...10 Warmest regards, Tsira
really i was following your dream music... it's something like constucting a flower from fragrance....*10*
In two short stanzas you say so much! I see you pay tribute to a survivor, who managed to keep his vision of life whole through his ordeal. You can feel the inner beauty of this private person and you will never violate that privacy. This is how I interpreted the beautiful poem.
amazing imagery and beautiful poem, Sandra, its so moving and inspiring.10 WITH AFFECTION Mamta
This is a speechless tribute to the memory of your dear poet friend, whose time was 'short listed by sunset, ' and for whom the 'music has ended.' And yet the birds make sure that his works live on. He would be proud of such tribute. And thank you for sharing it with us.