Tuesday, August 5, 2008

Dream Music Comments

Rating: 5.0

In dreams you walked through vast fields of wildflowers,
While river insects sang their autumn Psalms.
Time like a painted lady butterfly,
At last brought new life to your work worn frame.
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Sandra Fowler
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Walterrean Salley 25 December 2009

This is a speechless tribute to the memory of your dear poet friend, whose time was 'short listed by sunset, ' and for whom the 'music has ended.' And yet the birds make sure that his works live on. He would be proud of such tribute. And thank you for sharing it with us.

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Ravi Sathasivam 06 December 2009

The imagery of this poem is very beautiful. A perfect rhythm too. Well penned Enjoyed reading it 10+

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Eyan Desir 26 November 2009

Lets hope you have written a book... this is class

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 27 October 2009

‘The music of your mood is safe with me.’ Brilliant touch down. Glib and lithe. Ten++ with euphony. Ms. Nivedita UK Please read my Poems: Why Hack My She [In Elite 500] Enigmatic Navel or others. niv

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Rachel Butler 21 September 2009

For it took all your spirit to survive. If this is Heaven, Friend, may I come too? Rachel Ann Butler

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Vinod Kumar 14 September 2009

Beyond Predictable Beauty of colourful butterflies and rythamic string waves, thank you for sharing,10+++

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Fay Slimm 19 June 2009

Your own eloquence dear Sandra was 'never learned in books' as you so tenderly demonstrate in this poem - you are the epitome of aptitude for writing quiet reflective poetry and this is a gem of an example.... it soothes the soul.... thank you my friend love as always - - Fay.

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the music of your mood is safe to me...few lines with a great meaning and much sweetness..10++++

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surviving and living..the difference told as a music itself the leisure andrelaxation of an ever working nature is amasing..a wonderful poem

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Cindy Kreiner Sera 23 April 2009

A stunning Poem - I am totally enthralled by your use of words – they linger on in the mind and draw me back to read again - again. Dream music - soul music - Sandra's music. A Rare gift you have and faithfully share - Thank you

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Robert Howard 14 April 2009

You have a way of singing us our favorite songs! 'The music of your mood is safe with me.' and all the safer for being shared.

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Ken E Hall 06 April 2009

Dream music indeed.you teach us what the ears can see and the eyes can feel, I'll go with this one, never end, ...regards uavanice1

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 01 April 2009

I repeat your words ' May the music never ends '. Best Regards Naseer

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Nimal Dunuhinga 17 March 2009

This eloquence dream music I hear all through your valuable poems Sandra! And indeed a solace to burning human nature.

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Sameer Ahmed 01 February 2009

Very astonishing poem ingrained with beautiful imageries that show your inside soul so rich with natural scenics..........10/10 Warm Regards Sameer

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Bob Blackwell 01 January 2009

'The music of your mood is safe with me', a lovely phrase to end a lovely poem. The pictures you paint are so vivid and so very real. Bob

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Tsira Goge 13 December 2008

While river insects sang their autumn Psalms. .................................................................. Hello Sandra, Thin poems... Very kind and sincere...10 Warmest regards, Tsira

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premji premji 05 November 2008

really i was following your dream music... it's something like constucting a flower from fragrance....*10*

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Mary Naylor 29 October 2008

In two short stanzas you say so much! I see you pay tribute to a survivor, who managed to keep his vision of life whole through his ordeal. You can feel the inner beauty of this private person and you will never violate that privacy. This is how I interpreted the beautiful poem.

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Mamta Agarwal 28 October 2008

amazing imagery and beautiful poem, Sandra, its so moving and inspiring.10 WITH AFFECTION Mamta

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