Sunday, January 13, 2013

Dream Me Comments

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Can all your smiles be only mine?
The moonlike face can on me shine?
Can I be the breath of life yours
Dream me, dear lady; I wanna be your dream
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Jahan Zeb
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Heather Wilkins 02 June 2013

when you write to a dear lady as such, I am sure you will be her dream. touching write

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Valsa George 18 January 2013

This is such a passionate expression of love! Is it just an infatuation or a stable longing for a permanent bond? Let Jahan remain in her dreams as a never dying inspiration! Wish you all the best!

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Kanav Justa 16 January 2013

with such a nice writing talent i am pretty sure not only when she sleeps , , , but even when she is awake, , she dreams of you, , ,

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Payal Parande 15 January 2013

so beautiful...i am lost for words sir you are a fantastic writer....

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 14 January 2013

it is so nice to read someone write like this! certain lines are too familiar! 10

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Sallam Yassin 13 January 2013

I am sure that will be really a good dream great and sweet love dream

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Unwritten Soul 13 January 2013

Better reality than a dream_Soul

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Gajanan Mishra 13 January 2013

Dream me dear lady. Very good one. thanks.

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