Monday, May 12, 2008

Dream-Mate Comments

Rating: 4.6

Hold my arm and keep me warm
Spun a wave around the heart
o my pleasure-mate!
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Ashraful Musaddeq
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 12 August 2012

if someday I lose you How can then I sail paradise o my soul-mate! .. such a lovely poem.. how will I sail to paradise? will it not breach of promise? what a tragic loss in your demise?

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beautiful reading for a beautiful fear from losing the mate of your mind and the soul...10+++

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Mohammed Albalushi 20 March 2009

Hold my arm and keep me warm, wonderful love experss, i love it

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Raihana Abdul Jabbar 05 November 2008

jus' outstanding....no words to say....10...

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Patricia Gale 18 September 2008

A dreamy piece......

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Existential Despair 14 September 2008

What pleasureful read indeed...it makes feel like i'm being saved and taken to dreamy paradise far far away

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Sarwar Chowdhury 13 September 2008

...warming/pleasing/lovely.....................10 oh pleasure-mate! oh pleasure-land! really a fine composition!

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Anna jonson 02 September 2008

waw good poem... enjoyed 10 from me

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Love unites all things beautiful and perfect, there is no need to fear. Great piece, thanks! best regards, joan d.h.

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Mohammed Albalushi 26 August 2008

i really enjoye reading tis lovely peom, wish u all the best

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Ashraful Musaddeq

Ashraful Musaddeq

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