Tuesday, December 8, 2020

Dream Macabre Comments

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My imagination ran shamelessly amok last night
While I slumbered in beaded sweat, askance that I would
Be peddling ornate coffins to the absurdly rich, then
Second handing them to poorer souls for paltry profit.
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L MILTON HANKINS
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Bri Edwards 16 December 2020

askance (adverb) " with an attitude or look of suspicion or disapproval" Are you saying your imagination ran askance? I may be wrong, but it seems you are using askance as an adjective. hmm? " I heaved their unboxed tuxedoed beloved into the pit" this gave me a mild chuckle favorite line: " And laughing lustily sped away…, then I awakened." to MyPoemList I bet you REALLY did it. bri :)

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