Monday, September 15, 2014

Dream, Love And Illusion Comments

Rating: 5.0

My dream love has become a legend...so perfect so pristine, surreal and divine
whom will see, touch and desire but cannot possess...or may acquire again in dreams
My dream is a teaser to an eternal truth of an end
Its an embellishment, a soothing balm and an energy potion to drag myself a bit further
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Bill Cantrell 15 September 2014

An interesting and quite a unique poem that flows with the greatest ease to the reader, well done.

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