Tuesday, September 29, 2009

Dream Lost In Fogs Comments

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My dreams,
lost in miseries,
dancing before my eyes,
In my virtual,
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Sahar Sahar
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Afzal Shauq 14 December 2009

awesome and I agree with the remarks of nazli and say..yes this poem has some how pictographic effects to touch hearts and souls.. your way of writing here is fantsies type and the way you expressed is pretty intersting and seems professionally done.. you are doing a good job and the make up of verese and links between them is wonderful.. well done sahar sahar dear..10/10

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Rehana Nazli 03 October 2009

Refocus and visualise new dreams...life goes on with renewed hopes and aspirations.

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