Friday, August 29, 2008

Dream Land Comments

Rating: ★2.7

I look out
into the deep blue sky
wishing I could run about
Or maybe to just fly
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Michael Carlson
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Besa Dede 26 March 2012

I like the composition of the poem, good imagination. I would just pay a little attention to spelling. Maybe you were trying to say flee in the end? :))

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Stephanie Fiddy 29 August 2008

Very creative! ! ! ! ! :)

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Michael Carlson

Michael Carlson

Phoenix, Arizona
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Michael Carlson
Phoenix, Arizona
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