Tuesday, October 21, 2014

Dream Land Comments

Rating: 4.5

I imagine of a dream- land of my own
Above the surface are the hills of gold
Below my feet are the wells of gas and oil
On the road rolls many a piece of diamond
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Abdul Wahab
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Colonel Muhamad Khalid Khan 07 November 2014

A visionary poem. I ejoyed reading it.Keep it up.I invite you to read my new poem Allah Hoo and comment Col Muhammad Khalid Khan

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Paul Butters 01 November 2014

Great vision. John Lennon would approve.

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 29 October 2014

the last stanza is just nice, but the first is too much even to dream..Hi Abdul Wahab!

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