Somnolent screenplay
rehearsal for waking life -
Pre-reality
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Very imagistic and well structured. The mind set applies to so many situation where action will follow in due time.
The embers of thought burning slow and in tune with life Thankyou love duncan X
Ku-dos for these haiku! I shall certainly raise a mug of can't miss ku-miss to the ku-ragious effort put forth by Ms. Ori. All right, that's enough of the punning around for now. GWG
Love this Dream KU. Fascinating images expertly rendered love Allie xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
Midnight...You 'KU it just right....' Tis a lovely write...''''''''''''''''''''''FRANK/FJR
Original thought provoking poem. I suppose at an elemental level a new life in the womb is completely in touch with contentment and yet senses that there is another part of mother awaiting outside the womb to cradle baby with her arms.
Thoughts in utero...... hmmmmm Linda... it amazes.... your mind.... the odes and sonnets that you delivered... indeedly vivid!
It's like another life in there, another world. Like especially the birthing metaphor. Highly compressed, crisp and poetic delivery of these ideas Linda. xx