Friday, May 29, 2009

Dream Is Dream Comments

Rating: 5.0

My love in dream
I see you thee, hand in hand
strolling beside the silver sea
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Asif Baloch
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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 04 June 2009

Dream is dream but the first step towards reality as well. Beautiful poem, Asif, especially the last stanza. Best Wishes Naseer

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Sandra Fowler 31 May 2009

A verry evocative poem picture. You are a fine imagist. Kind regards, Sandra

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Ashraful Musaddeq 30 May 2009

Nice work on dream,10+++

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Saadat Tahir 30 May 2009

hi asif...very nice poem gifted guy did it very well its ten cheers

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Anjali Sinha 30 May 2009

wowwwwwwww dreams of gold on a silvery night i like your antonyms a good write a tenner from me anjuuuuuuu

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Shashendra Amalshan 30 May 2009

that's a nice sweet, refreshing poem indeed...it's a great one in the sense that this helps to get away from the complexities and the complications of modern world..nice10+++ nice expressions too

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 30 May 2009

Your dream is a progressing mind..............unison of your desires! !

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Lady Grace 30 May 2009

'I prayed for sun not to rise and night to stay a little while'..what a sweet poem written by a sweet poet..grace

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