Dream Impressions Comments

I have a distinct impression of crossing a dark alley With bumpy stones and potholes To reach that beautiful, illuminated place, So calm and serene, a subtle dwelling, I knew not Exists, so close beyond my awareness.. I am not a dream analyst. Still I maysay that your dreams points to a peaceful life surrounded by loving people....10

Thanks Valsa for reading and for your comment. Yes I too encounter lots of problems in commenting. often I can't even finish the comment and the page changes to next poem, making it very hard. I think site is overloaded for most of the time.

The bliss, a beautiful dream gives is unparalleled. We are able to travel to mysterious lands, see people whom we have never met in life and see things of exotic and mysterious charm. What we need is peaceful sleep on a calm night with a relaxed mind. Excellent write Savita....! Great Diction! Top marks! It is strange that I cannot comment on some poems. So I keep going from poem to poem. Do you encounter such a difficulty?

Yeah it's imaginatively written; nice words choice// I enjoyed

in dream comes calling migrant missing selves.....creative piece