Monday, August 17, 2009

Dream House Comments

Rating: 4.6

It is the dream house for her
built with love and charm
the coolest clouds ever there
where the hot sunny rays are the light!
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lily peace lago every by to ph
COMMENTS
Noel Horlanda 20 September 2009

to build a house out from true love is always a dream of a married woman.And in that dream house born a happy family that live ever after. A great idea for a great theme. Well penned...

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Sarwar Chowdhury 19 August 2009

great is your power of eloquence! fine wording! 10+

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 18 August 2009

imaginative poem well illustraed.10 shan

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Rakesh Bedi 17 August 2009

What an imagination, lago lago; mind blowing! ! !

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Catrina Heart 17 August 2009

A beautiful and lovely poem and theme.......the dream house built with love and charm.....awesome...10+++++++++

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Ramesh T A 17 August 2009

A dream house is going to become a reality with Space Station and A Moon Life is also possible as I have said in my poem, Lago! Nice dream!

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Ejaz Khan 17 August 2009

Beautiful imagery, lovely write!

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lily peace lago every by to ph

lily peace lago every by to ph

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