Thursday, December 13, 2018

Dream Holiday Places Comments

Rating: 5.0

Oh yes, oh yes salams, hello, hi
Aha, oh my, oh my, oh my
My favorite dream places happen to be
coincidentally
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Jennifer Birchall 10 May 2019

This makes me want to get my passport renewed asap, a wonderful poem dear s.zaynab.

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Saniya Galeyeva 07 January 2019

Seeing the beauty of the world and having a place to come back are the most important things in our life. Thanks for sharing this nice poem.

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Nasarudheen Parameswaran 28 December 2018

May Allah bless your desires.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 19 December 2018

this is very RACY STYLE all the while good poetry unique style u have not again come by

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 19 December 2018

Aw yes, I will come by now then. Thanks for comment m yes it's a racy poem.

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Mihaela Pirjol 17 December 2018

A wonderful poem filled with exuberant joy, and the repetition makes a perfect rhymed refrain! Absolutely beautiful!

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 17 December 2018

Warmest thanks for lovely feedback, am so glad the refrain is good and u liked it.

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Dr Antony Theodore 17 December 2018

Ah it's always great to travel and geo atlas mysteries unravel upon God's wide world to marvel.....oh this is marvelous poem. your great desire to travel, to unravel. to learn about people. languages, cultures, dramatic expressions, literature, poetry, their songs and dance forms....... great desire.. yes it is true , travelling makes us great persons and will help us so very well to escape for all bias.. tony

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 17 December 2018

Thanks soo much Dr. Tony for your lovely great feedback, yes travel brings all that to us. Best wishes.

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Riza Braholli 14 December 2018

the day when we remain without a dream in the head means that we have finished living... thank you & congrat. by Dr. Riza

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 17 December 2018

That's a great quote, thanks muchly for your fine comment.

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Bree Z Love 14 December 2018

This poem I feel in love with! Thanks for sharing

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Brian Markey 14 December 2018

You cannot deny, You love to fly, To so many different places, The tickets you buy, Give an endless supply, Of so many colourful faces.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 14 December 2018

Colourful faces eh, yeah yellow brown, red and white wow yay. Thanks so much for your cool comment. I read so many here, wondering if I have read u before.

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Jazib Kamalvi 14 December 2018

A beautiful extempore. I really enjoyed it. Read my poem Love and L u s t. Thanks

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 14 December 2018

Wow thanks for nice comment l I think I read that great poem already, but let's see if I commented.

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Lamar Cole 14 December 2018

Great poem about dream holiday places.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 14 December 2018

Thanks so much for feedback.

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Lyn Paul 13 December 2018

Simply uplifting and exciting. Inspiring us all to travel. You bring complete brightness to our poetic world. Share your poem to a travel agency for it is great advertising.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 14 December 2018

Aww such a heartwarmingly sweet comment Lynn, am glad to bring cheer to the poetic world. You have a heart of gold, so take care.

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Tom Billsborough 13 December 2018

A dream landscape of beautiful places and a joy to read your loving account. I must say I'd love to visit Mecca. I have an English version of the Qu'ran and often read the fine verses of this great Faith. I'm not as well travelled of you but you convey your love of these places so wonderfully

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 14 December 2018

And it's a heartwarming joy to read your lovely comment, great to know u read the Holy Quran aww u would luv to visit Mecca! Nice to know. Thanks soo much for delighting comment.

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Muzahidul Reza 13 December 2018

Oh yes, oh yes salams, hello, hi Aha, oh my, oh my, oh my My favorite dream places happen to be coincidentally, ...... Wow! What a youthful starting! ! Amazing indeed, on great background you have written a great poem, congrats, thanks for sharing the poem with us here in PoemHunter, full 10

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 14 December 2018

Thanks so much brother. Ok going to rate yours too.

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Mj Lemon 13 December 2018

This one goes to myfavourites! It reminds me of the joy of travel. Even more profound, it reminded me that the planning and preparation were just as crucial to having a great time. A magnificent poem!

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 14 December 2018

Warmest thanks for such lovely sweet feedback. I think I forgot to rate your poem, going to now. Best best wishes.

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Anil Kumar Panda 13 December 2018

A beautiful poem that shows your passion for travelling. Very well crafted that makes it interesting reading. Thanks for sharing.10++++

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 14 December 2018

Thanks muchly for a nice comment sir.

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Rajnish Manga 13 December 2018

Excellent poem with an interesting rhyming experiment. Many of the places mentioned in the poem also happen to be in my own wish list. Thanks, zaynab ji. Going places to collect and bring back memories A collection of curios and cherished souvenirs This has been a poetic travelogue.... for any voyage in vogue.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 14 December 2018

Nice to know sir they are your wish list places too! Thanks so much for the nice comment.

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Unwritten Soul 13 December 2018

May one day you will visit these countries, perform hajj, and to other countries as well...you sound so excited here, we know u are really want to go there :)

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 14 December 2018

Aww that's so sweet and endearing if you to mention the Hajj and your nice comment pal. Take care.

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Mahtab Bangalee 13 December 2018

beautiful poem on country and traveling- /// (GOD's Saying) O human being come and worship me after worshiping spread over the world observe all how beautifully I (GOD) created and be grateful to me those who are grateful to me I'm (GOD) also gives him/her my blessings .....//// so, wander, travel country to country and observe all and be grateful to GOD

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 14 December 2018

You are so right, thanks for your great enlightening comment in support of travelling Go's beautiful world.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 14 December 2018

Sorry typo in a rush, I mean God's world.

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