Friday, December 5, 2008

Dream Girl Comments

Rating: 4.5

searching for my earth shine, lost within the glare
teared up from the snow blind, lost within this stare
gleaning the fields of love, searching for soul food
never thought you'd be above, having to conclude
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Jacob Gifford 17 December 2008

how long have you been a member

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Jacob Gifford 17 December 2008

I loved it i got 5 poems I wrote them form scratch i just became a member on sunday I add a poem every 1 to 2 days

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Ashlea Pearson 12 December 2008

I really like this poem, and i like your style of writing. Poems are meant to make you feel something, and i believe that this poem does.

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Drishti Magoo 07 December 2008

beauty lies in the pain that it produces... wakinfg up to real world from the beloved's dream...

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Tia Maria 05 December 2008

Wow... spellbinding... that was amazing! 10/10 - thanks so much for your comment :)

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