Saturday, October 14, 2017

Dream Girl Comments

Rating: 4.0

Haven't seen her any time before
Yet keep dreaming to make her mine;
Hoping to see her around sometimes
When clouds have passed by the sun.
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Khirod Dalpati
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Sochukwu Ivye 16 October 2017

The same reality with most people but opined elegantly here. You just took the words out of many mouths and ornamented with your brilliant poetry. Thanks for this impressively unavoidable work of poetry.

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Rajkamal P.j 15 October 2017

really romantic..good congrats

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Khirod Dalpati 15 October 2017

Thank you for your comments Sir, I read your poems and thoughts. They are beautiful There once was a politician Who said woods won't make any rain and this one. Too good

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 14 October 2017

I enjoyed this....Fluxive structural movement throughout, and a simple theme but one that is expressed with much substance ~FjR~

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Khirod Dalpati 15 October 2017

Thank you for your Comments Sir, I just opened your library of poems and found beautiful poems from a great poet and this one Woman in the night singing songs to a lamp post, waiting for a reprise of ''1984''. For Big Brother, ....Ziggy - his Spiders From Mars. And she knows she'll never live those times again... still she freeze-frames it all in the Stardust of her mind - Such is Life......................... Beautiful. If you could kindly read my other poems and guide me with your comments... I shall be blessed....

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