Monday, October 19, 2015

Dream Girl Comments

Rating: 5.0

Keep her in your dreams,
with appealing streams,
with her cuts and curls,
with her diamonds and pearls,
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Akhtar Jawad
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Dr Dillip K Swain 31 July 2022

Sir, this is an endearing poem...Top score

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Khalida Bano Ali 19 September 2019

Keep her in your dreams, Keep her in your dreams, keep her in your heart. A nice love story.

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Bisma Mirza 09 November 2015

Very Nice onE! ! 10 on 10..................

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Saheb Mohapatra 24 October 2015

great piece of poetry with all the ingredients to make it soothing and sweet..............loved reading it.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 23 October 2015

Thrilling expression. A beautiful love poem I like most. Thanks for sharing. - - 10

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Valsa George 21 October 2015

Wow... such a sweet rhyming poem! Great advice to people blind in love!

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M Asim Nehal 20 October 2015

Please make a girl for me with you enlightened mind and creative imaginations.......loved it.

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Musawir Raakh 19 October 2015

Great work of rhymes, cool 1

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Kelly Kurt 19 October 2015

Many things seem desirable until you have them

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Hazel Durham 19 October 2015

Superb rhyming, lovely imagery and great advice!

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Khalid Saifullah 19 October 2015

A nice advice......................................

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Loke Kok Yee 19 October 2015

Good advice to all young lovers. Thanks

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