Monday, September 21, 2009

Dream Girl Comments

Rating: ★4.8

The whole day we were on a carousel;
Ever since we met I've under her spell;
She lights the fire inside me;
I believe she is the missing key
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Corey Fauchon
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Angel Stein 21 September 2009

this is a great poem but it kind of seems like your trying to hard to ryhme try using a website or book that could help with your ryhme scheme :)

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Corey Fauchon

Corey Fauchon

Newcastle, NSW, Australia
Corey Fauchon
Corey Fauchon
Newcastle, NSW, Australia
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