Thursday, December 13, 2018

Dream From A Sickbed Comments

Rating: 5.0

She wandered through a landscape,
Full of pretty little builds,
Not really knowing where she was,
Not really did she care,
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Sarah Persson
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Khairul Ahsan 24 January 2019

In my younger days, I used to see similar dreams when I fell sick. 'When all at once her balance lost, She fell to worlds unknown, Embracing all that captured eyes, Never ending places flown' - Nice imagery!

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Jennifer Birchall 13 December 2018

Great imagery used in this poem, Sarah

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Sarah Persson 13 December 2018

Thank you Jennifer

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