Friday, April 27, 2018

Dream Fragments Comments

Rating: 5.0

Opening the latch,
my mind flits out
through sleep's
window, roams
...
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FABIYAS M V
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Dr Antony Theodore 30 March 2020

A few dreams lie deep under like fossils; others vanish as butterflies. yes. very true. all poets are dreamers... some of our dreams linger in the heart and mind influencing us lifelong. thank u. tony

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HABEEBURAHMAN 23 February 2020

A few dreams lie deep under like fossils; others vanish as butterflies.

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Jagdish Singh Ramána 14 March 2019

a very beautiful poem, sir! a beautiful imagery in poetic words!

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Chinedu Dike 18 November 2018

Well thought-out and nicely written. Thanks for sharing.

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Jazib Kamalvi 28 April 2018

A refined poetic imagination, Fabiyas. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Fabiyas M V 28 April 2018

Thanks, Jazib. I will read your verse shortly.

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Dr Antony Theodore 28 April 2018

A few dreams lie deep under like fossils; others vanish as butterflies... that was a depiction of a real dream..... dream characteristics........ thank u dear poet. tony

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Fabiyas M V 28 April 2018

Thanks, Tony!

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Bernard F. Asuncion 28 April 2018

Dear Fabiyas, such a profound poem....10++++

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Fabiyas M V 28 April 2018

Thanks, Bernard!

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