Saturday, August 24, 2013

Dream Departed Comments

Rating: 4.8

I once had a dream,
That I cherished held and true.
Long ago it seemed so simple,
But now so hard and vague.
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veena srinivas
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Jazib Kamalvi 31 October 2017

A refined poetic imagination, veena. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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Shraddha The Poetess 05 March 2014

very nicely written.............................. liked it.... i also invite u to read mine..

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Sanjay Mehta 30 August 2013

Those who dream only they live their life, others only exist. Till the dream is shattered one lives with it, isn't this wonderful. What one is because of one's dreams, fulfilled or unfulfilled as the case may be.

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Lucifera Santez 25 August 2013

Now I stand before its cenotaph, My devastated life and simply say with a dreary heart, My dear dream departed. AMAZING WRITE. please read some of mine and comment. :)

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Dave Walker 24 August 2013

An emotional poem, a great write.

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