When you're fast asleep
The mind sneeks out, and around,
Wearing the moonlight
Like some ancient royal gown.
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Your imagery is simply stunning... to be read again and again! Gayle
Wow Smoky what a combination of words and surreal images you have painted here, absolutely beautiful work, I love it.
This is a dance I would never want to miss.... A wonderful poem and I enjoy it a lot Jim Troy
This Milky Way is our cradle; and what better dance floor could there be here than the stars? The universe is so grand and huge, it hurts the brain even trying to imagine it, but I feel you've come very close to doing it with this one.
It started with the title-I was spellbound all the way through the dance! Constance