Thursday, March 19, 2015

Dream Dance Comments

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They were two thugs
Tough men
Who fought for their territory
Like animals in jungles
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Madathil Rajendran Nair
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Valsa George 21 March 2015

That must have been an exhilarating experience! Unfortunately such sweet dreams come only in the wee hours of morning that we are fated to have an abrupt end to such exciting visions as we wake up from sleep in the morning! Enjoyed!

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Rajesh Thankappan 20 March 2015

Very amusing poem with an very awakening thought!

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 20 March 2015

How did dance originate? Maybe the dream gives a clue. Beautiful recollection and presentation. Hope friends will dance as well.

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Kee Thampi 20 March 2015

very tough fight They moved in a swirl That shamed dervishes everywhere Oh, could this be our world! ? And then I awoke

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Madathil Rajendran Nair

Madathil Rajendran Nair

Bombay, India
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