Sunday, October 6, 2013

Dream Coffee Moment Comments

Rating: 5.0

I WISH to have a coffee moment
With no other than a president
Barrack Obama is a fine choice
And hear his thoughts and plans and voice.
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Naida Nepascua Supnet
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Khairul Ahsan 19 October 2013

Hi Naida! Please keep a slot for me too! :) The poem is funny but the idea is great! Good rhyme, good language, a well articulated poem, gets 10/10 from me. Keep writing, my friend!

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Troy Ulysses Davis 15 October 2013

Beautiful piece. Not a bad invitation either.

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Marvin Brato 06 October 2013

Succinct narration of imaginary moments having coffee moment with great and special people! Well-penned.

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Deepak Sawhney 06 October 2013

Hey Naida. Brilliant...great humour. What more can I say... I sense a total transformation in your writing style, content, technicality as well as rhythm & rhyme. Enjoyed it thoroughly. Surely a 10/10. Sorry don't get too much time. Do accept my apologies

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Naida Nepascua Supnet

Naida Nepascua Supnet

bayambang, pangasinan, philippines
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