Monday, April 9, 2018

Dream Children Comments

Rating: 5.0

Every minute of our children's life is planned,

Before-school and after -
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Chinedu Dike 14 April 2018

Your insight into the nature of children of nowadays is impressive. Really a witty reflection elegantly brought forth with clarity of thought and mind. A beautiful creation, Banamala. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched.

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Banamala Sen 15 April 2018

I work with children, and wish to express my observations about the lifestyle they are pursuing in modern society. At the same time, I miss the simple childhood experiences we had! Thanks for your thoughtful comments.

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Jazib Kamalvi 10 April 2018

A refined poetic imagination, Banamala. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Banamala Sen 11 April 2018

I will definitely do. Appreciate your thoughtful comments. Thank you.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 10 April 2018

Before-school and after every minute of our children's life is scheduled, . You have nicely observed childhood and beautifully presented perception in this excellent poem...10

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Banamala Sen 11 April 2018

I feel worried to observe how children's lives are changing in the modern society! Glad to share with you! Thanks for your comments.

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Carl Roussell 09 April 2018

Good commentary on putting down the electronics and smelling the roses. Nice work here.

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Banamala Sen 11 April 2018

Glad to share my observations with my poet-friends at PM. Feel worried about too much usage of electronics in our lives, specially children's lives! Thank you.

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