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See, I knew I was no good without you, here I am alone again
Sitting by the fire lonely, keeping company with paper and pen
Thinking of you, wanting to enjoy your company and incredible smile
Endulging in your awesome body, enjoying kisses for the longest while
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longing, desires, lonliness, affection, feelings and beats...yourp poem is so much alive and kicking, truly capturing the love and the associated feelings...keeping company with paper and pen, lonley pounding heart....that long awaited kiss all placed perfectly creating a true poetic MAGNUM OPUS...Debbie you are too good to be true
This poem was even better the second time I read it. Just a great piece of writing. Your Friend Lynn
Deborah: This beautifully written poem takes the reader right into the poem itself. Sadly, I hope you get some peace and find this lover again. Your Friend Lynn
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8/1/2025 9:42:34 PM # 1.0.0
this poem shows: Talent/ gift, and at the same time much poetic discipline. Even with the long line the rhythm was flawlessly maintain... Plus the rhymes were perfect.. nice piece.