Dream Bed Comments

The melancholy mood, especially the cold seeping into your chest is so effective. The triple rhyme at the end of the last three lines not only completes the poem beautifully, but give a snug cosy feel that everything is all right and you can stay in bed in heaven for ever....10 Karin Anderson

Aww, this is so sweet Sonya. I love it. Faith can move mountains and lead us from the darkest places. Very well done and thank you for sharing :)

Your faith is strong, to take you through the darkness, through despair to a wonderful resting place....beautiful......10+

Yea one must stick to the faith, as drowning man cling to a floatsam............A Good Write...............

'...must keep believing And you will take care of the rest'... subtle message inside...the last stanza lines read really nice...Sonya, i liked...10