Wednesday, November 11, 2020

Dream-Awakened Eyes (Surrealist Poem) Comments

Rating: 5.0

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Dark, dense night, distant stars, crescent moon, quietude.
Somnolent, soft dreams; a velvety voice evocative:
Embalms with tenderness; caresses with fancy affection:
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Yiyan Han 14 November 2020

A very good philosophical write on an awakening soul,5+++ on my fav

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M Asim Nehal 13 November 2020

You have glorified the dreams. We are incomplete without them. Dreams distorted by fulfilment, giving birth to new dreams: A perpetual desperation for living—the agony of survival; ......So true.5********

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Sandra Feldman 11 November 2020

There's enough good poetry here, to keep us quiet for a while Away from the turbulent waters, that in life cover so many of our traveled, miles. Thank you...

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