Dream As If You'Ll Live Forever.. Live As If You'Ll Die Today Comments

I can relate to it, I enjoyed reading it thanks for inviting me to read it

AMAZING! cant personally relate to it but still completely amazing and breath taking poem ~Bella

comprehensible* my bad

not bad, as someone below me said there are some issues with your use of the language, but it was overall comprehendible, and pretty good.

'I dream things that never were and say why not? ' Cute, but you stole that quote. I quite enjoyed this poem on a whole though.

very well written.. keep up the good work..

Very Nice. I like the dreaming of it since it seems almost ethereal in it's simplicity, but the imagery it invokes is powerful. I really do like this one a lot. Very good job. You have a poets soul young man and thank you for thinking of me to share it with. If you know how to add people as friends, I'd like to be yours, I don; t know how and I'd like this to go to my favorites and not many make that folder for sure, but no clue how to do that either, so keeping emails until someone tells me how to do these things. Apologies on taking solong ot get back to you, had no idea I had an inbox. LOL

beautiful my friend, u`v touched my heart, what an imagery you have created, can not be expressed by words.the water imagery (it was like a huge rain casted in a calm river then flow) , your poems teach the people how to live in the concrete world.i want more from you.10+++++--

Hi abdallah, u wrote me some time ago, sorry took long 2 reply..i appreciate ur imagination, ur themes r well portrayed, use of imagery also.abit of an issue with language use, ensure grammatical errors don't impede comprehension.

this is really nice and its so creative....

An incredible poem with an incredible lesson! you will always keep the reader spellbound...with your spanking, new, and zealous prose... 100/10... loved the title and everything about this poem! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

ur really an imaginative person good luck for ur future n keep up the good work

I loved your poem-never stop writing

i enjoy reading your poem. a world without lairs... if only their was such a place. I really enjoyed your poem. keep up the good work.

Incredible, , a poem like that is very beautiful and outstanding, , i love every line in it, , with every line you are showing an imaginary beautiful pic. nice poem son :)

It is a good poem. one thing though, you should spell out you, instead of writing u. It adds a degree of professionalism to it. Bless

Abdallah, 'For u, U see things that are impossible to happen; and u say, 'Why? ' But for me, , I dream things that never were, , , and I say, 'Why not? ' We are living a wonderful world where everything is possible. Too many people get lost in small things and lose the sight on the magical beauty of life. I am always very excited to see young people like you with great ideals. I really am sometimes surprised on how easily and fast these ideals can melt away. Please, please, firm up your wonderful thoughts and keep them and live by them for the rest of your life. This is a great poem.

Ah..that was good poem again by you...the title was remind me something i have listened before...Dont stop writing what your mind say..it truly a peace to think! your friend_Unwritten Soul

expressive............. suddenly in the middle of noway I heared a horrible voice, , it was my little brother crying like if u were in a wonderful place then u found a mice, , thats really make u feel dying thats really honest........ plz check out my new ones and plz rate them