Dream And Achieve Success Comments

One thing that makes this poem exceptional is the way you expressed your idea in a natural and sincere way. You wrote the way you are and never made it appear to the reader that you were trying to be someone else, and that is the best quality of a writer. The other thing is the smooth flow of your thoughts, making your points/arguments valid as the lines went along. You had the idea and you presented your views logically, not 'hanging' lines that go nowhere. Lastly, you manage to cath the reader's attention from first line to the last, although you can still do some editing here and make is concise without loosing the flow. ! 0++++++

amazing.....luv da way u play with words.....al da bst