Thursday, January 13, 2011

Dream Afar Comments

Rating: 5.0

She is a dream now
A desire far off
A pain hidden within
A fancy in the world’s eye;
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Abhay Vignesh Liginlal
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Jenny Gordon 14 January 2011

Fascinating and delightfully poetic in the similes. Who is the 'you'? Your sweetheart?

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