Cool moon
Sun in noon
Gives joy
In different mood to enjoy
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nice Chris Cowan10 minutes ago interesting and introspective
Even though nothing is sure...good expression...the uncertainty of everything, events related to our life, is nicely reflected in this line....But still, even after having knowledge of this uncertainty, we also have the pleasure of dreaming about the future...the two entities-good and bad clearly comes into play in the last two lines...good job..
Cool moon Sun in noon Gives joy In different mood to enjoy
Mr.T.Ganapathy V.Nice