Tuesday, May 8, 2007

Dream Comments

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im serching for you my dream
im waiting for you my dream
i have a question to ask you
why you take this much lone
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sOoraj Pottekat
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Loyd C Taylor Sr 07 April 2008

Hello again poet friend. Again, I understood your poem and it's direction. The grammer and spelling cause some stumbling for English people. Keep up the good work and don't hesitate to rework your poems and re-enter them. Blessings., LC

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