Tuesday, September 22, 2020

Dream Comments

Rating: 4.9

Dream is like flower
In youth it spreads sweet fragrance
None greets withered one
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MAHTAB BANGALEE
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Rob Lamberton 09 February 2023

Why let your dreams wither? Even the flower returns each season and spreads as the years go by.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 28 October 2022

Bravo my dear Bravo! ! ! ! ! !

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Anjandev Roy 28 October 2022

Fantastic short work.....thank u.....

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Sultan Deen 28 February 2021

Dream like the flower In youth it spreads sweet fragrance None greets withered one {{{{ beautiful three liners

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Moore Noore 24 February 2021

beautiful three liners you are; nice about dream

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Britte Ninad 26 January 2021

fantastic short]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]

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Mac Che 25 January 2021

superb fantastic haiku] youth is like a flower!

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Dr Antony Theodore 07 December 2020

In youth it spreads sweet fragrance None greets withered one.. Yes very true none greets a withered one. this is a real reflection of our young days in life and later when we become old, we may experience rejection. it is the way of the world. tony

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Indira Renganathan 28 September 2020

A big truth in just three lines..third line is the highlight....short, cute and succinct...many stars***********

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 27 September 2020

Dreams mostly cling to youth, vibrant and aggressive. It ceases when life is at its end. A brilliant short write. Thought provoking.

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Suresh Kumar Ek 24 September 2020

The fate of all haiku beautiful

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Valsa George 23 September 2020

Good dreams are like fresh flowers giving joy and fragrance and it is cherished by everyone! No one loves a withering flower. A bad dream is like a withering flower! Very concise! Also beautiful comparison!

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Bernard F. Asuncion 23 September 2020

A well executed piece. Truly excellent...5 stars+++

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Susan Williams 22 September 2020

How sadly true- -yet the old one has weathered many storms in life and its perfume of wisdom should have a depth and artistry that the youngest has yet to acquire- -ah, the ways of life are sometimes upside down, aren't they?

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Edward Kofi Louis 22 September 2020

Dream along and, Float into another realm! ! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Varsha M 22 September 2020

Yes I agree with you. No one even sees the withered one. True words.

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M Asim Nehal 22 September 2020

Profound short poem. Terse and telling.5 Stars

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Aarzoo Mehek 22 September 2020

So so true. Spread the love and bask in the youthful fragrance of love. Nice thought Mahtab.5*

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