Thursday, June 28, 2018

Dream Comments

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I do dream, of how sweet is life...
when I see that girl..
who made my dream so nice.
A short story of you and me..unwinded itself in the midst of night,
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Pranesh Patil
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Dr Antony Theodore 10 September 2019

short story of you and me..unwinded itself in the midst of night, In which you appear distinct and walk me through... The alley lit low.. the path which you only know.. Draped in long white gown and your blue gleaming eye... beautiful and revelang expressions.. lovely poem. tony

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Kumarmani Mahakul 28 June 2018

the closer I move the further you walk...lost again in the darkness of night. the longing for you has never been too long... you make me dream and take me along... I am again in that jocund company of yours....so touching. Nice expression. A beautiful poem on dream and love amazingly shared. Thank u dear Pranesh for sharing this gem.10

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