Sunday, May 6, 2018

Dream Comments

Rating: 4.9

Sitting on clouds,
Floats my dream.
Blown by winds,
From place to place,
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Bharati Nayak
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Anjandev Roy 12 December 2022

This is simply beautiful......thanks for sharing....

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Rebecca Navarre 12 December 2022

And Such truly beautiful notes on poem too! ..

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Rebecca Navarre 12 December 2022

Simply breathtaking and i feel I'm understating! .. Again Beyond #ing! ..++++++++++++++++++++++++

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Rebecca Navarre 12 December 2022

I haven't ever heard dreams described so deeply and incredibly Beautiful! ..

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Dr Dillip K Swain 27 February 2021

We all are children at heart and so dream like children.....I totally agree with you. A beautiful poem.

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Dr Antony Theodore 09 January 2020

Sitting on clouds, Floats my dream. Blown by winds, From place to place, Flying over blue seas, Green mountains, Again you are one with the nature. fine expressions full of love. tony

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Unnikrishnan E S 06 August 2019

A profound statement of the fact of life “At last settles, On its very own dreamland. ”

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Bhagabat Prasad Hotta 07 May 2019

Beautiful poem. Dream is a most important part in the life. Like the water I ocean.100+++

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Tom Billsborough 27 June 2018

We are all children if we dare to dream. Often the dream finds a satisfying end to its journey. Your poem is a dream fulfilled and is going to journey into my list of favourites, Bharati.

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Glen Kappy 19 June 2018

the feel of this one, bharati, reminds me of my poem friday reverie. occasionally, as you do here, i lapse into this kind of thought as (also in) sabbath reverie and listening to genius loves company. -glen

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Bharati Nayak 19 June 2018

Thank you Glen Kappy for your valuable feed back.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 29 May 2018

coincidentally I also composed a poem on dreams the guy below is fond o dreams poetry

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Bharati Nayak 30 May 2018

Thank you PoetPoet for reading and commenting.Every poet is a dreamer.Without dream there will be no creativity.I have read your poem on dream and like it.

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Bri Edwards 28 May 2018

(cont.) i like the poem and it shall go to MyPoemList, and, yes, to a showcase, probably, if i remember it for July or? some favorite lines: And slipping away, Playing hide and seek, Taking various shapes AND At last settles, On its very own dreamland.....thanks for sharing, and for your Poet's Notes. bri :)

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Bharati Nayak 30 May 2018

It is always a pleasure to read your comments.There is no bound to our imagination.In our imagination we visit different lands or get what we wish.Thank you Bri Edwards for your nice comments.

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Bri Edwards 28 May 2018

(cont.) ..What is the origin of Helter Skelter? The term long pre-dates the fairground ride and has been used to mean disorderly haste or confusion since at least the 16th century. Thomas Nashe used it that way in his 'Four letters confuted',1592: Helter skelter, feare no colours, course him, trounce him. (continued) ...

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Bri Edwards 28 May 2018

dear poetic-child, i like the poem, and assume i am not to take it literally; you don't really 'own' a dream which does so much wandering, DO YOU? ! here is a note, Google found for me, about Helter Skelter: { but when i hear the 'word' i immediately think of a murder sensation which occurred in California when i was a college student } (continued) ..

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A child like dreamy poem seeking freedom and beauty.Simple but beautiful

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Bharati Nayak 22 May 2018

Thank you so much poet Nasarudheen Parameswaranji for your valuable comment.

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Akhtar Jawad 18 May 2018

We all are children at heart and so dream like children. Our foundations are in our childhood, we are what we were made during our childhood. a nice poem!

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Bharati Nayak 22 May 2018

Thank you Akhtar Jawadji for reading and commenting on my poems.I totally agree- -our foundations are in our childhood.We carry our childhood dreams forward.

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Khairul Ahsan 16 May 2018

'We all are children at heart' - True, very true! As we grow older, we tend to think and act like a child. Poets are indeed dreamers. Poets thoughts float around like clouds, wander around like travelers in a strange land.

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Bharati Nayak 22 May 2018

Thank you for your wonderful comment on my poem.I am so grateful.

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Muhammad Ali 13 May 2018

Hi Bharati, your poem is true and your dreams are travelling similarly as you say... places to places, friends and peoples... in various shapes in every poem. very beautiful poem

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Bharati Nayak 15 May 2018

Many many thanks for your appreciative comment.Even when every other thing goes wrong, dream gives us strength.

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Dear bharati nayak, you are being a child while writing a poem. it is true.children are only express their feelings without any hesitation and barriers. American poet Walt witman said that I am the child of nature and my soul. you also blessed by those mothers (nature and soul.) my wishes... because of the busy work in office I am not available in poem hunter site for some months.. now I am came back

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Bharati Nayak 15 May 2018

Thank you poet Saravanan Sivasubramanian for reading and giving your valuable comment.I am happy that you find time for Poem Hunter again.

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Anil Kumar Panda 09 May 2018

A dream to be in the clouds and drifting away to far away places. What's a lovely feeling. Strong imagery. lovely poem.

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Bharati Nayak 15 May 2018

Thank you Anil Kumar Panda for your kind comment.

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