Sitting on clouds,
Floats my dream.
Blown by winds,
From place to place,
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Simply breathtaking and i feel I'm understating! .. Again Beyond #ing! ..++++++++++++++++++++++++
I haven't ever heard dreams described so deeply and incredibly Beautiful! ..
We all are children at heart and so dream like children.....I totally agree with you. A beautiful poem.
Sitting on clouds, Floats my dream. Blown by winds, From place to place, Flying over blue seas, Green mountains, Again you are one with the nature. fine expressions full of love. tony
A profound statement of the fact of life “At last settles, On its very own dreamland. ”
Beautiful poem. Dream is a most important part in the life. Like the water I ocean.100+++
We are all children if we dare to dream. Often the dream finds a satisfying end to its journey. Your poem is a dream fulfilled and is going to journey into my list of favourites, Bharati.
the feel of this one, bharati, reminds me of my poem friday reverie. occasionally, as you do here, i lapse into this kind of thought as (also in) sabbath reverie and listening to genius loves company. -glen
coincidentally I also composed a poem on dreams the guy below is fond o dreams poetry
Thank you PoetPoet for reading and commenting.Every poet is a dreamer.Without dream there will be no creativity.I have read your poem on dream and like it.
(cont.) i like the poem and it shall go to MyPoemList, and, yes, to a showcase, probably, if i remember it for July or? some favorite lines: And slipping away, Playing hide and seek, Taking various shapes AND At last settles, On its very own dreamland.....thanks for sharing, and for your Poet's Notes. bri :)
It is always a pleasure to read your comments.There is no bound to our imagination.In our imagination we visit different lands or get what we wish.Thank you Bri Edwards for your nice comments.
(cont.) ..What is the origin of Helter Skelter? The term long pre-dates the fairground ride and has been used to mean disorderly haste or confusion since at least the 16th century. Thomas Nashe used it that way in his 'Four letters confuted',1592: Helter skelter, feare no colours, course him, trounce him. (continued) ...
dear poetic-child, i like the poem, and assume i am not to take it literally; you don't really 'own' a dream which does so much wandering, DO YOU? ! here is a note, Google found for me, about Helter Skelter: { but when i hear the 'word' i immediately think of a murder sensation which occurred in California when i was a college student } (continued) ..
A child like dreamy poem seeking freedom and beauty.Simple but beautiful
Thank you so much poet Nasarudheen Parameswaranji for your valuable comment.
We all are children at heart and so dream like children. Our foundations are in our childhood, we are what we were made during our childhood. a nice poem!
Thank you Akhtar Jawadji for reading and commenting on my poems.I totally agree- -our foundations are in our childhood.We carry our childhood dreams forward.
'We all are children at heart' - True, very true! As we grow older, we tend to think and act like a child. Poets are indeed dreamers. Poets thoughts float around like clouds, wander around like travelers in a strange land.
Hi Bharati, your poem is true and your dreams are travelling similarly as you say... places to places, friends and peoples... in various shapes in every poem. very beautiful poem
Many many thanks for your appreciative comment.Even when every other thing goes wrong, dream gives us strength.
Dear bharati nayak, you are being a child while writing a poem. it is true.children are only express their feelings without any hesitation and barriers. American poet Walt witman said that I am the child of nature and my soul. you also blessed by those mothers (nature and soul.) my wishes... because of the busy work in office I am not available in poem hunter site for some months.. now I am came back
Thank you poet Saravanan Sivasubramanian for reading and giving your valuable comment.I am happy that you find time for Poem Hunter again.
A dream to be in the clouds and drifting away to far away places. What's a lovely feeling. Strong imagery. lovely poem.
This is simply beautiful......thanks for sharing....