Tuesday, October 17, 2017

Dream Comments

Rating: 5.0

Today I am sleeping awakening,
I became lifeless.
All of my dreams remained in the dream,
Just in my life sorrow and tears,
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Rahul Shil
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Me Poet Yeps Poet 26 March 2019

In this world, I am so alone GET A GIRL FRIEND @20 YOUR LIFE WILL BECOME LOVELY THEN READ MY POEMS MOMS SMILES U WILL LOVE IT

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Dr Antony Theodore 01 September 2018

My dreams are Fragmentation. In this world, I am so alone. My life has been a streamless boat, ...the mind and imagination, a world of its own which gives me dreams that lead me to real life....... thank u dear poet. tony

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Chinedu Dike 18 February 2018

Work of an active imagination, well articulated and nicely brought forth with conviction. Thanks for sharing Rahul.

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Rahul Shil 19 February 2018

Many many thanks Mr Chinedu for Report and comment about my poem....

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Parimal Saha 26 October 2017

Dreamless dream is my dream. I'm going to find out today, My dreams churchyard. Where one Innocent bud, Contain of actual impersonation. The bud blossomed in its flowers, All possibilities will be Implemented. In this above line is so imaginary.... really this poem is so sweet able and spiritual.... so nice poem... I give 10 ++++

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Rajnish Manga 18 October 2017

The poem brings out the result of a lonely soul who is bereft of any friend or a dream to give solace. But it is reassuring that there is still a ray of hope somewhere inside to untangle the helplessness in life. In this world, I am so alone. My life has been a streamless boat, Dreamless dream is my dream.

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Rahul Shil 18 October 2017

Yes but This poem I so Imaginary..... Thanks Rajnish ji for comments and report...

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Parimal Saha 31 October 2017

Yes this poem is so imaginary

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Beautiful poem Rahul Thank you for sharing Mario Odekerken

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Rahul Shil 18 October 2017

Thanks... for comments and report....

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